Mission briefing rewording and fact checking

Co-Authored-By: Gustas <37534529+punkpun@users.noreply.github.com>

mods/d2k/maps/atreides-01a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, atreides01a.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Harvest Spice from the Imperial Basin. Construct a Spice Refinery and defend it against the Harkonnen troops scattered throughout the basin. You have been assigned only limited offensive forces - use them wisely.\n\nYou will have to learn the subtleties of mining as you go, but remember to build Silos to store the Spice. When you run out of storage space you can not gather more Spice. Also, any building without adequate concrete foundation will need immediate repair and be vulnerable to erosive damage from the harsh environment. Your greatest adversary may be the elements.\n\nGood luck.\n
+		Briefing: Harvest Spice from the Imperial Basin. Construct a Spice Refinery and defend it against the Harkonnen troops scattered throughout the basin. You have been assigned only limited offensive forces - use them wisely.\n\nYou will have to learn the subtleties of mining as you go. Remember to build Silos to store Spice; without storage, you cannot gather more. Any building without adequate concrete foundation will need immediate repair and be vulnerable to erosive damage from the harsh environment. Your greatest adversary may be the elements.\n\nGood luck.\n
 		BriefingVideo: A_BR01_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/atreides-01b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, atreides01b.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Harvest Spice from the Imperial Basin. Construct a Spice Refinery and defend it against the Harkonnen troops scattered throughout the basin. You have been assigned only limited offensive forces - use them wisely.\n\nYou will have to learn the subtleties of mining as you go, but remember to build Silos to store the Spice. When you run out of storage space you can not gather more Spice. Also, any building without adequate concrete foundation will need immediate repair and be vulnerable to erosive damage from the harsh environment. Your greatest adversary may be the elements.\n\nGood luck.\n
+		Briefing: Harvest Spice from the Imperial Basin. Construct a Spice Refinery and defend it against the Harkonnen troops scattered throughout the basin. You have been assigned only limited offensive forces - use them wisely.\n\nYou will have to learn the subtleties of mining as you go. Remember to build Silos to store Spice; without storage, you cannot gather more. Any building without adequate concrete foundation will need immediate repair and be vulnerable to erosive damage from the harsh environment. Your greatest adversary may be the elements.\n\nGood luck.\n
 		BriefingVideo: A_BR01_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/atreides-03a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, atreides03a.lua, atreides03a-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Bring the Atreides forces up to combat strength - quickly. Guard against surprise attacks and ensure Spice production.\n\nThe Ordos forces are light but numerous. To combat the Ordos, you have been granted license to produce Quads, which have a greater anti-vehicle capability than Trikes. Upgrade your Light Factories to allow production of these units.\n\nMeet any aggression with overwhelming force.\n\nGood luck.\n
+		Briefing: Bring the Atreides forces up to combat strength - quickly. Guard against surprise attacks and ensure Spice production.\n\nThe Ordos forces are lightly armored but numerous. To combat them, you are authorized to produce Quads, which have a greater anti-vehicle capability than Trikes. Upgrade your Light Factories to allow production of these units.\n\nMeet any aggression with overwhelming force.\n\nGood luck.\n
 		BriefingVideo: A_BR03_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/atreides-03b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, atreides03b.lua, atreides03b-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Bring the Atreides forces up to combat strength - quickly. Guard against surprise attacks and ensure Spice production.\n\nThe Ordos forces are light but numerous. To combat the Ordos, you have been granted license to produce Quads, which have a greater anti-vehicle capability than Trikes. Upgrade your Light Factories to allow production of these units.\n\nMeet any aggression with overwhelming force.\n\nGood luck.\n
+		Briefing: Bring the Atreides forces up to combat strength - quickly. Guard against surprise attacks and ensure Spice production.\n\nThe Ordos forces are lightly armored but numerous. To combat them, you are authorized to produce Quads, which have a greater anti-vehicle capability than Trikes. Upgrade your Light Factories to allow production of these units.\n\nMeet any aggression with overwhelming force.\n\nGood luck.\n
 		BriefingVideo: A_BR03_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/atreides-05/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, atreides05.lua, atreides05-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: According to our spies, the Fremen are being held at the far Northwest corner of Sietch Tabr. Push your way through the Harkonnen ranks to rescue the hostages.\n\nScout the terrain before you launch the main assault. Our Engineers must reach the Barracks and capture it intact. The rest of the base can be razed to the ground.\n\nAdditionally, there are rumors of an illegal Smuggling operation in the area. A large shipment of contraband is expected at the Smuggler's Starport. If you can capture the Starport before the contraband arrives, you will be able to confiscate it for the Atreides war effort.\n\nBe warned, the Smugglers have Mercenary allies who may assist them if you interfere.\n\nGood luck.\n
+		Briefing: According to our spies, the Fremen are being held at the far Northwest corner of Sietch Tabr. Push your way through the Harkonnen ranks to rescue the hostages.\n\nScout the terrain before you launch the main assault. Our Engineers must reach the Barracks and capture it intact. The rest of the base can be razed to the ground.\n\nAdditionally, rumors suggest an illegal Smuggling operation in the area. A large shipment of contraband is expected at the Smuggler's Starport. Capture the Starport before the contraband arrives, to seize it for the Atreides war effort.\n\nBe warned, the Smugglers have Mercenary allies who may come to their aid.\n\nGood luck.\n
 		BriefingVideo: A_BR05_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: medium

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-01a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen01a.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Mine the Spice from the Imperial Basin, before the Atreides try to seize the area. Execute anyone who tries to stop you.\n\nBuild Silos to store the Spice. Remember to place buildings on concrete foundations to prevent erosion and gradual decline. To build without concrete would be inefficient. Inefficiency will not be tolerated.\n
+		Briefing: Mine Spice from the Imperial Basin, before the Atreides try to seize the area. Execute anyone who tries to stop you.\n\nBuild Silos to store Spice. Remember to place buildings on concrete foundations to prevent erosion. To build without concrete would be inefficient. Inefficiency will not be tolerated.\n
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR01_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-01b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen01b.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Mine the Spice from the Imperial Basin, before the Atreides try to seize the area. Execute anyone who tries to stop you.\n\nBuild Silos to store the Spice. Remember to place buildings on concrete foundations to prevent erosion and gradual decline. To build without concrete would be inefficient. Inefficiency will not be tolerated.\n
+		Briefing: Mine Spice from the Imperial Basin, before the Atreides try to seize the area. Execute anyone who tries to stop you.\n\nBuild Silos to store Spice. Remember to place all buildings on concrete foundations to prevent erosion. Building without concrete is inefficient. Inefficiency will not be tolerated.\n
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR01_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-02a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen02a.lua, harkonnen02a-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Strengthen your forces at our mining camp in the Imperial Basin. We must punish the Atreides for their insolence. Teach them the consequences of opposing House Harkonnen.\n\nOur radar will help you find your targets.\n
+		Briefing: Strengthen your forces at our mining camp in the Imperial Basin. The Atreides must be punished for their insolence. Teach them the consequences of opposing House Harkonnen.\n\nOur radar will help you find your targets.\n
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR02_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-02b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen02b.lua, harkonnen02b-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Strengthen your forces at our mining camp in the Imperial Basin. We must punish the Atreides for their insolence. Teach them the consequences of opposing House Harkonnen.\n\nOur radar will help you find your targets.\n
+		Briefing: Strengthen your forces at our mining camp in the Imperial Basin. The Atreides must be punished for their insolence. Teach them the consequences of opposing House Harkonnen.\n\nOur radar will help you find your targets.\n
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR02_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-03a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen03a.lua, harkonnen03a-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Attack and destroy the Atreides base at Sietch Tabr. Strike hard and eliminate all resistance.\n\nHeavier Quad vehicles will be made available for your attack. Upgrade your Light Factory to gain access to these vehicles.\n
+		Briefing: Attack and destroy the Atreides base at Sietch Tabr. Strike hard and eliminate all resistance.\n\nHeavier Quad vehicles have been made available for this assault - upgrade your Light Factory to access them.\n
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR03_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-03b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen03b.lua, harkonnen03b-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Attack and destroy the Atreides base at Sietch Tabr. Strike hard and eliminate all resistance.\n\nHeavier Quad vehicles will be made available for your attack. Upgrade your Light Factory to gain access to these vehicles.\n
+		Briefing: Attack and destroy the Atreides base at the Sietch Tabr. Strike hard and eliminate all resistance.\n\nHeavier Quad vehicles have been made available for this assault - upgrade your Light Factory to access them.\n
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR03_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-05/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen05.lua, harkonnen05-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Protect the Outpost at Habbanya to prevent Imperial interference. Rush ground troops through the mountain passes and secure our Outpost. Once this is done, turn on the Ordos and crush them.
+		Briefing: Protect the Outpost at Habbanya to prevent Imperial interference. Rush ground troops through the mountain passes and secure the Outpost. Once secured, turn on the Ordos and crush them.
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR05_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: medium

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-07/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen07.lua, harkonnen07-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Your target is the Atreides High Tech Factory, the weak link of the Duke's plan to combine with the Imperial Troops. Without it, the Imperial Carryalls will soon fall into disrepair and not be able to ferry further reinforcements to the battle.\n\nThe Atreides force is large and well-fortified - a frontal assault will fail. However, one Construction Yard to the West of their position is isolated and lightly defended. A small strike force has been airlifted deep into enemy territory. Capture the Construction Yard and use it against the Atreides.
+		Briefing: Your target is the Atreides High Tech Factory, the weak link in the Duke's plan to combine forces with Imperial Troops. Without this facility, the Imperial Carryalls will soon fall into disrepair and be unable to ferry further reinforcements to the battle.\n\nThe Atreides force is large and well-fortified - a frontal assault will fail. However, one Construction Yard to the West of their position is isolated and lightly defended. A small strike force has been airlifted deep into enemy territory. Capture the Construction Yard and use it against the Atreides.
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR07_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: nopowers

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-08/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen08.lua, harkonnen08-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: The Ordos continue to grow in strength, thanks to their acquisition of new weaponry. The Ordos know that the wrath of the Harkonnen will soon fall upon them, and have allied with the Atreides.\n\nThis will not protect them from our Atomics. Eliminate any Atreides you encounter, but focus upon the Ordos as the main target. Smash their army, burn their structures and bring back the spoils to decorate the walls of the Palace! Capturing or destroying the Ordos Palace will show the Atreides the true might of House of Harkonnen and will throw the Ordos allegiance into disarray.\n\nOur scouts report a Mercenary leader inspecting a nearby Heavy Factory. If the Heavy Factory can be captured, the Mercenaries could be persuaded to fight for the Harkonnen. The mercenaries receive reinforcements via the Starport, so this must remain in their possession for them to be of any use.
+		Briefing: The Ordos continue to grow in strength, thanks to their acquisition of new weaponry. The Ordos know that the wrath of the Harkonnen will soon fall upon them, and have allied with the Atreides.\n\nThis will not protect them from our Atomics. Eliminate any Atreides you encounter, but focus upon the Ordos as the main target. Smash their army, burn their structures and bring back the spoils to decorate the walls of the Palace! Capturing or destroying the Ordos Palace will show the Atreides the true might of House of Harkonnen and throw the Ordos alliance into disarray.\n\nOur scouts report a Mercenary leader inspecting a nearby Heavy Factory. If you can capture the Heavy Factory, the Mercenaries may be persuaded to join our cause. The mercenaries receive reinforcements via the Starport, so this must remain in their possession for them to be of any use.
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR08_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: unrestricted

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-09a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen09a.lua, harkonnen09a-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Only the Atreides and Imperial forces now remain. The Sardaukar, still scattered from their long march from the North, cannot mass their forces to attack. Only the destruction of the Emperor's base encampment will stop the flow of Imperial forces.\n\nOnce this has been accomplished, turn on the Atreides and annihilate them. Claim Arrakis for House Harkonnen!
+		Briefing: Only the Atreides and Imperial forces now remain. The Sardaukar, still scattered from their long march from the North, cannot amass their forces to attack. Only the destruction of the Emperor's base encampment will stop the flow of Imperial forces.\n\nOnce this has been accomplished, turn on the Atreides and annihilate them. Claim Arrakis for House Harkonnen!
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR09_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: unrestricted

mods/d2k/maps/harkonnen-09b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, harkonnen09b.lua, harkonnen09b-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Only the Atreides and Imperial forces now remain. The Sardaukar, still scattered from their long march from the North, cannot mass their forces to attack. Only the destruction of the Emperor's base encampment will stop the flow of Imperial forces.\n\nOnce this has been accomplished, turn on the Atreides and annihilate them. Claim Arrakis for House Harkonnen!
+		Briefing: Only the Atreides and Imperial forces now remain. The Sardaukar, still scattered from their long march from the North, cannot amass their forces to attack. Only the destruction of the Emperor's base encampment will stop the flow of Imperial forces.\n\nOnce this has been accomplished, turn on the Atreides and annihilate them. Claim Arrakis for House Harkonnen!
 		BriefingVideo: H_BR09_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: unrestricted

mods/d2k/maps/ordos-03a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, ordos03a.lua, ordos03a-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: The Harkonnen hinder the production of Spice. A Harkonnen attack will disrupt efficient production. Inefficiency cannot be tolerated. The Harkonnen must be eliminated.\n\nNew weapons are available - the Quads. Newer weapons are more powerful. Powerful weapons ensure victory.
+		Briefing: The Harkonnen hinder Spice production. A Harkonnen attack will disrupt efficient production. Inefficiency cannot be tolerated. They must be eliminated.\n\nNew weapons are available - the Quads. Newer weapons are more powerful. Powerful weapons ensure victory.
 		BriefingVideo: O_BR03_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/ordos-03b/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, ordos03b.lua, ordos03b-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: The Harkonnen hinder the production of Spice. A Harkonnen attack will disrupt efficient production. Inefficiency cannot be tolerated. The Harkonnen must be eliminated.\n\nNew weapons are available - the Quads. Newer weapons are more powerful. Powerful weapons ensure victory.
+		Briefing: The Harkonnen have been hindering Spice production. Inefficiency cannot be tolerated. They must be eliminated.\n\nNew and more powerful weapons are available - Quads. Powerful weapons ensure victory.
 		BriefingVideo: O_BR03_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/ordos-04/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, ordos04.lua, ordos04-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: The Smugglers at Sietch Tabr must be neutralized. Capture the Outpost where their families have taken shelter as insurance. The children's lives will assure the loyalties of their fathers. Use an Engineer to enter and capture the building.\n\nThe Smugglers' new partners, the Harkonnen, may attempt to protect them. Harkonnen firepower is great, but we have recently acquired tanks that may counter this.\n\nEnsure our investment is used wisely.\n
+		Briefing: The Smugglers at Sietch Tabr must be neutralized. Capture the Outpost where their families have taken shelter as insurance. The children's lives will assure the loyalties of their fathers. Use an Engineer to enter and capture the building.\n\nThe Smugglers' new partners, the Harkonnen, may attempt to intervene. Harkonnen firepower is great, but we have recently acquired tanks that may counter this.\n\nEnsure our investment is used wisely.\n
 		BriefingVideo: O_BR04_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: low

mods/d2k/maps/ordos-05/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, ordos05.lua, ordos05-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: Spice is paramount. The Atreides possess the Spice. We must capture their Starport and bring in an MCV to harvest the Spice.\n\nCombat is costly. Fight only if the Atreides obstruct the flow of Spice. Use the minimum amount of funds for defense.\n\nMine and store what is needed to pay our debt to the Ixians. Once that amount has been collected, Ordos forces will withdraw.
+		Briefing: Spice is paramount. The Atreides control it. Capture their Starport and bring in an MCV to start mining.\n\nCombat is costly. Fight only if the Atreides obstruct the flow of spice. Use the minimum amount of funds for defense.\n\nMine and store what is needed to pay our debt to the Ixians. Once that amount has been collected, Ordos forces will withdraw.
 		BriefingVideo: O_BR05_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: medium

mods/d2k/maps/ordos-06a/rules.yaml

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ World:
 	LuaScript:
 		Scripts: campaign.lua, utils.lua, ordos06a.lua, ordos06a-AI.lua
 	MissionData:
-		Briefing: The Starport must be protected. All other efforts are secondary. No House will be allowed to interfere with the arrival of our Ixian weaponry.\n\nOnce we possess these illegal technologies, we will confuse and crush our opponents. Until then, survive. This will give you a higher probability of success.
+		Briefing: The Starport must be protected. All other efforts are secondary. No House will be allowed to interfere with the arrival of our Ixian weaponry.\n\nOnce we possess this illegal technology, we will confuse and crush our opponents. Until then, survive.
 		BriefingVideo: O_BR06_E.VQA
 	MapOptions:
 		TechLevel: medium